Orinilure Collective: Difference between revisions

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|Realm=[[Orinilure]]

|Capital=[[Orinilure City]]

|Leadership=~~The wealthiest members of each cycle~~

|Leadership= TBD

|Rivals=[[Erden Monopoly]]

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|Introduction=The '''Orinilure Collective''' is the governing body of the [[Oinien]] of the [[Orinilure Mountains]], in eastern [[Orinilure]]. Its capital is [[Orinilure City]].

|History=The Collective was formed in 230 ME. Because Oinien cities are linear and depend on one another, a common government ~~was established~~ early to serve the settlements of the range.

|History=The Collective was formed in 230 ME. Because Oinien cities are linear and depend on one another, the Collective established a common government early to serve the settlements of the range.

In 440 ME the Collective chartered the [[Erden Monopoly]] to mine and settle the [[Irere Mountains]]. The Monopoly came to govern the western range ~~in its own right~~. The two states ~~went to war~~ from 626 to 633 ME. The treaty that ended the war left the land between them, around the House of Iriché in the [[Orinilure Valley]], as a neutral zone, and both states built the Treaty Forts along it.

In 440 ME the Collective chartered the [[Erden Monopoly]] to mine and settle the [[Irere Mountains]]. The Monopoly came to govern the western range independently. The two states fought from 626 to 633 ME. The treaty that ended the war left the land between them, around the House of Iriché in the [[Orinilure Valley]], as a neutral zone, and both states built the Treaty Forts along it.

|Structure and leadership=The Collective is an oligarchy ~~established in law~~. Leadership passes in cycles of accumulated wealth: those who accumulate the most wealth in a year govern for the following cycle.

|Structure and leadership=The Collective is a legally established oligarchy. Leadership passes in cycles of accumulated wealth: those who accumulate the most wealth in a year govern for the following cycle.

|Relations with other factions=The Collective and the Erden Monopoly remain rivals, separated by the neutral zone and the Treaty Forts. The Collective controls the [[Deep Roads]] within its territory and has agreements with the [[Council of Lavierin]] ~~governing~~ the roads ~~that link~~ Orinilure to the [[Arânzeni Confederation]].

|Relations with other factions=The Collective and the Erden Monopoly remain rivals, separated by the neutral zone and the Treaty Forts. The Collective controls the [[Deep Roads]] within its territory and has agreements with the [[Council of Lavierin]], which governs the roads linking Orinilure to the [[Arânzeni Confederation]].

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 |Realm=[[Orinilure]]
 |Capital=[[Orinilure City]]
-|Leadership=The wealthiest members of each cycle
+|Leadership= TBD
 |Rivals=[[Erden Monopoly]]
 }}
 {{Factions Sections
 |Introduction=The '''Orinilure Collective''' is the governing body of the [[Oinien]] of the [[Orinilure Mountains]], in eastern [[Orinilure]]. Its capital is [[Orinilure City]].
-|History=The Collective was formed in 230 ME. Because Oinien cities are linear and depend on one another, a common government was established early to serve the settlements of the range.
+|History=The Collective was formed in 230 ME. Because Oinien cities are linear and depend on one another, the Collective established a common government early to serve the settlements of the range.
-In 440 ME the Collective chartered the [[Erden Monopoly]] to mine and settle the [[Irere Mountains]]. The Monopoly came to govern the western range in its own right. The two states went to war from 626 to 633 ME. The treaty that ended the war left the land between them, around the House of Iriché in the [[Orinilure Valley]], as a neutral zone, and both states built the Treaty Forts along it.
+In 440 ME the Collective chartered the [[Erden Monopoly]] to mine and settle the [[Irere Mountains]]. The Monopoly came to govern the western range independently. The two states fought from 626 to 633 ME. The treaty that ended the war left the land between them, around the House of Iriché in the [[Orinilure Valley]], as a neutral zone, and both states built the Treaty Forts along it.
-|Structure and leadership=The Collective is an oligarchy established in law. Leadership passes in cycles of accumulated wealth: those who accumulate the most wealth in a year govern for the following cycle.
+|Structure and leadership=The Collective is a legally established oligarchy. Leadership passes in cycles of accumulated wealth: those who accumulate the most wealth in a year govern for the following cycle.
-|Relations with other factions=The Collective and the Erden Monopoly remain rivals, separated by the neutral zone and the Treaty Forts. The Collective controls the [[Deep Roads]] within its territory and has agreements with the [[Council of Lavierin]] governing the roads that link Orinilure to the [[Arânzeni Confederation]].
+|Relations with other factions=The Collective and the Erden Monopoly remain rivals, separated by the neutral zone and the Treaty Forts. The Collective controls the [[Deep Roads]] within its territory and has agreements with the [[Council of Lavierin]], which governs the roads linking Orinilure to the [[Arânzeni Confederation]].
 }}