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=== Early Tuzquão Civilization ===

Tuzquão first arrived in what is now the town of [[Saindo]], located in southwestern Balúrail. From here, they rapidly expanded outwards, encompassing most of the Western Lowlands. There, Tuzquão quickly adapted to the swampy conditions~~, learning~~ to build on the uneven terrain. Here, they also began to be influenced by the ascendant spirit of [[Mavai]], which has served as their main spiritual influence since then.

Tuzquão first arrived in what is now the town of [[Saindo]], located in southwestern Balúrail. From here, they rapidly expanded outwards, encompassing most of the Western Lowlands. There, Tuzquão quickly adapted to the swampy conditions and learned to build on the uneven terrain. Here, they also began to be influenced by the ascendant spirit of [[Mavai]], which has served as their main spiritual influence since then.

|Geography=Lowlands are largely peat bogs with patches of solid ground interspersed between them. Light forests also dot the region. The land is fertile and supports Tuzquão agriculture.

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=== Flora ===

Mitratas - A fungus that grows on the borders of swamps. It ~~release~~ spores that can invade a victim killing them slowly. Often cultivated for poison.

Mitratas - A fungus that grows on the borders of swamps. It releases spores that can invade a victim, killing them slowly. Often cultivated for poison.

Impherals - A flowering plant that is noted for its flaming flower petals that release heat.

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Lersumon - A large bird that is known for its ability to swim rapidly underwater.

Oimãos - A lizard creature, it has a venomous bite.

Oimãos - A lizard creature; it has a venomous bite.

Quelotoxes - A large ~~inspect~~. Territorial and known to attack people.

Quelotoxes - A large insect. Territorial and known to attack people.

Aerbicars - Large peaceful mammals who make the swamps their homes. They have wide hooves that allow them to walk on the peat bogs.

Oeinsos - Deer like creatures. Herbivores. Hunted regularly for food.

Oeinsos - Deer-like creatures. Herbivores. Hunted regularly for food.

|~~Goverment~~ and ~~Politcs~~=The Western Lowlands are under the control of the League of Balúrail, the main government for the Tuzquão people.

| Government and Politics=The Western Lowlands are under the control of the League of Balúrail, the main government for the Tuzquão people.

=== Administrative Districts ===

Administrative districts within the ~~western lowlands~~ are the states of [[Ezinco]], [[Ivaiê]], most of the [[Gostiria|state of Gostiria]], and the [[Mifajene Reservation]].

Administrative districts within the Western Lowlands are the states of [[Ezinco]], [[Ivaiê]], most of the [[Gostiria|state of Gostiria]], the District of [Têr (District)|Têr]] and the [[Mifajene Reservation]].

|Demographics=The dominant demographic in the Western Lowlands is the Tuzquão people with a sizable Mifajene population located on the reservation. Immigrants from other realms make up a ~~minor~~ population in the major cities.

|Demographics=The dominant demographic in the Western Lowlands is the Tuzquão people, with a sizable Mifajene population located on the reservation. Immigrants from other realms make up a small portion of the population in the major cities.

|Transportation=~~The transportation~~ in the ~~western lowlands~~ is by a patchwork network of roads and by boat. ~~Due to~~ the swampy nature ~~of the land~~ and ~~frequent~~ impassable ~~terrains~~, ~~there are~~ no rail lines ~~in Balúrail~~. And travel between districts is sometimes challenging.

| Transportation=Transportation in the Western Lowlands is by a patchwork network of roads and by boat. Because of the land's swampy nature and frequently impassable terrain, Balúrail has no rail lines. And travel between districts is sometimes challenging.

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 === Early Tuzquão Civilization ===
-Tuzquão first arrived in what is now the town of [[Saindo]], located in southwestern Balúrail. From here, they rapidly expanded outwards, encompassing most of the Western Lowlands. There, Tuzquão quickly adapted to the swampy conditions, learning to build on the uneven terrain. Here, they also began to be influenced by the ascendant spirit of [[Mavai]], which has served as their main spiritual influence since then.
+Tuzquão first arrived in what is now the town of [[Saindo]], located in southwestern Balúrail. From here, they rapidly expanded outwards, encompassing most of the Western Lowlands. There, Tuzquão quickly adapted to the swampy conditions and learned to build on the uneven terrain. Here, they also began to be influenced by the ascendant spirit of [[Mavai]], which has served as their main spiritual influence since then.
 |Geography=Lowlands are largely peat bogs with patches of solid ground interspersed between them. Light forests also dot the region. The land is fertile and supports Tuzquão agriculture.
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 === Flora ===
-Mitratas - A fungus that grows on the borders of swamps. It release spores that can invade a victim killing them slowly. Often cultivated for poison.
+Mitratas - A fungus that grows on the borders of swamps. It releases spores that can invade a victim, killing them slowly. Often cultivated for poison.
 Impherals - A flowering plant that is noted for its flaming flower petals that release heat.
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 Lersumon - A large bird that is known for its ability to swim rapidly underwater.
-Oimãos -  A lizard creature, it has a venomous bite.
+Oimãos -  A lizard creature; it has a venomous bite.
-Quelotoxes - A large inspect. Territorial and known to attack people.
+Quelotoxes - A large insect. Territorial and known to attack people.
 Aerbicars - Large peaceful mammals who make the swamps their homes. They have wide hooves that allow them to walk on the peat bogs.
-Oeinsos - Deer like creatures. Herbivores. Hunted regularly for food.
+Oeinsos - Deer-like creatures. Herbivores. Hunted regularly for food.
-|Goverment and Politcs=The Western Lowlands are under the control of the League of Balúrail, the main government for the Tuzquão people.
+| Government and Politics=The Western Lowlands are under the control of the League of Balúrail, the main government for the Tuzquão people.
 === Administrative Districts ===
-Administrative districts within the western lowlands are the states of [[Ezinco]], [[Ivaiê]], most of the [[Gostiria|state of Gostiria]], and the [[Mifajene Reservation]].
+Administrative districts within the Western Lowlands are the states of [[Ezinco]], [[Ivaiê]], most of the [[Gostiria|state of Gostiria]], the District of [Têr (District)|Têr]] and the [[Mifajene Reservation]].
-|Demographics=The dominant demographic in the Western Lowlands is the Tuzquão people with a sizable Mifajene population located on the reservation. Immigrants from other realms make up a minor population in the major cities.
+|Demographics=The dominant demographic in the Western Lowlands is the Tuzquão people, with a sizable Mifajene population located on the reservation. Immigrants from other realms make up a small portion of the population in the major cities.
-|Transportation=The transportation in the western lowlands is by a patchwork network of roads and by boat. Due to the swampy nature of the land and frequent impassable terrains, there are no rail lines in Balúrail. And travel between districts is sometimes challenging.
+| Transportation=Transportation in the Western Lowlands is by a patchwork network of roads and by boat. Because of the land's swampy nature and frequently impassable terrain, Balúrail has no rail lines. And travel between districts is sometimes challenging.
 }}